At first I though I wasn't going to like it until the drums came in after the intro. It's a really interesting loop, kind of like something you might listen to before a big game to get yourself pumped up. Although i think you should have made your syth sounds a little louder, they get drowned out by the drums. But I love the drums! They really go along with the melody and give it a rocky edge. I think the ending could use a little work, it kinda just stops (maybe some kind of epic drum solo for the ending?) or a fade out would work :)
Not crazy about your synth sound. It has too much wiggle to it, and I find it distracting. It also seems to follow an erratic pattern harmonically. The drums sound very heavy metal, and the atmosphere you created with your synths dosn't support that style.
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At first I though I wasn't going to like it until the drums came in after the intro. It's a really interesting loop, kind of like something you might listen to before a big game to get yourself pumped up. Although i think you should have made your syth sounds a little louder, they get drowned out by the drums. But I love the drums! They really go along with the melody and give it a rocky edge. I think the ending could use a little work, it kinda just stops (maybe some kind of epic drum solo for the ending?) or a fade out would work :)
ReplyDeleteI like it, but I think the drums could have been turned down a little. You could also use a better ending, like Amanda said.
ReplyDeleteNot crazy about your synth sound. It has too much wiggle to it, and I find it distracting. It also seems to follow an erratic pattern harmonically. The drums sound very heavy metal, and the atmosphere you created with your synths dosn't support that style.
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