I really like how you transposed the beginning, it was very effective in making the loop sound that much more mysterious and dark. Although i think you should have picked a different sound in the beginning like you did in the end because the loop comes off as a "darkish" sound and then you have these high pitched (piano?)sounds come in. And I think you should have made the little drum "solo" more gradual or accompanied by another guitar because it seemed random and out of place.But I love the ending, it really wraps up the whole song and leaves the listener wanting more.
I'd like to hear the bass doing something different from what the main pattern is doing. The chopping pattern that you used was good, and the melodies were interesting.
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I really like how you transposed the beginning, it was very effective in making the loop sound that much more mysterious and dark. Although i think you should have picked a different sound in the beginning like you did in the end because the loop comes off as a "darkish" sound and then you have these high pitched (piano?)sounds come in. And I think you should have made the little drum "solo" more gradual or accompanied by another guitar because it seemed random and out of place.But I love the ending, it really wraps up the whole song and leaves the listener wanting more.
ReplyDeleteI'd like to hear the bass doing something different from what the main pattern is doing. The chopping pattern that you used was good, and the melodies were interesting.
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